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Kids first

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Kid’s first
By Kindred aka DarkSiderMometns

(IN THIS STORY ALL ARE BETWEEN THE AGES 17 TO 20)

*Sorry for an bad spelling or grammar*

They sat around at Kid’s drinking and talking happy, when Soul and Maka walked in holding hands, they have been dating for two years, much to Maka’s father dismay, they sat on the sofa together talking to the others, “Hey Maka what’s that on your hand?” Said Tsubaki, Maka smiled and looked at Soul who kissed her on the lips and nodded to her, turning back to her friends, she held up her hand so they could get a better look, “Soul asked me to marry him!” They girls screech at top volume making the boy’s cover their ears, “Dam girls I don’t think you were loud enough to get the dogs to howl!” Said Black Star, who got pummelled by a load of fists, knocking him flat on the floor.

“Congratulations Soul, have you told her father yet?” Kid said to him patting him on the back, “Thanks man and no we haven’t said anything to our families, that’s going to be fun!” he said with a smile. The girls walked off to the kitchen talking and giggling, “Are you sure Kid would mind?” Maka asked, “He will get a little weird about there is a bottle missing out of the wine rack, but I will deal with it… anyhow we are celebrating you and Soul and about time to!” Liz said popping the cork and pouring the champagne in to glasses, “I can’t believe you guys are going to get married!” Said Tsubaki Maka turned red in the face, “So how did he do it and when?” Said Patty looking at the ring on Maka’s finger, “Hummm well, it was to day before we came here, you know that we been arguing for the last couple of months…” “Yeah!” they said, “Well I been feeling kind of odd so I went to the Doctors to find out to see if anything was wrong, anyhow I thought Soul was going to be angry with me or upset, but he wasn’t and he pulled out the ring saying he was waiting for a good moment to ask me and thought now was as good as ever.” She said putting down the glass, “So what was the problem you had, that you had to go to the Doctors?” Liz asked waving to Soul “She hasn’t told you I’m surprised she hasn’t yet, she pregnant!” Soul said wrapping his arms around Maka waist and kissing her neck.

Covering his ears because she knew what was going to happen and just on queue all three of the girls Screech again, Kid and Black Star come in, Tsubaki put her hand around Black Stars mouth to stop him from talking or otherwise she would be dragging him home. “OH MY GOD, MAKA SOUL OH MY GOD” screamed Liz and Patty together hugging the both of them.

It was the late in the night when everybody started to go home, Patty was going home with Tsubaki and Black Star, she was given her hand with Black Star, he walked into a mirror and now he was out for the count, everybody was happy for Soul and Maka and they all wanted to be there when they tell her father.

So Liz and Kid was left alone, Liz was busy picking things up and putting them in the bin, “I’m so happy for Maka and Soul, they really are good for each other, wish I could find a guy like Soul!” she said to Kid, who was freaking out about a smile stain of blood on his shirt that he got off Black Star, “That idiot, there’s a spot of blood on my white shirt…” and he when on about how worthless he was and how insignificant he is, Liz rolled her eyes at him, (For the 10th time to day) he thought “Kid get up, come on get up!” she said to him, he stood up slowly and hung his head, Liz took the bottom of his shirt and pulled it over his head in a quick motion and then putting it into the washer with ten other shirts of his that had a speck of stains on them.

She looked back at him, she froze at his chest (Hello honey, look at his chest) she thought, (Eeep, Kid is not a kid, fuck not with that body, oh god help me) “Liz you staring at me!” Kid said looking at her oddly (Why is she staring) he thought, “Oh sorry I didn’t mean to, its, it’s just…!” “I know my body is repulsive, I’m so, so sorry I will go and put a shirt on!” he said walking way, Liz just stood there with her jaw drop (he’s an idiot) she thought.

“I need to talk to him or other wises he’s going to do something really stupid” she said to herself, walking up stair to talk to him, she couldn’t help but think about his chest. (Hummm it was nice, oh fuck sakes not now) She got to his door she stopped hear Sobs coming from it, “She hates me, she hates me, I’m repulsive, hideous monster, she will never love me”” he cried, (Did he say what I think he said) “Oh god” she said, she found herself knocking on his door, “Don’t come in!” he said, “Don’t be daft” she said opening the door seeing him on the floor still not wearing shirt, “I told you not to come in!” he said looking at her, “Kid, I don’t think your hideous or repulsive, I…I…I think your… hot!” she said feeling her face go red. He looked up at her and saw her face is bright red, he sniffed “You really thing I’m hot!” she nodded at him, sitting on the floor with him, she put her hand on her shoulder, “Yes you are, to me!” she smiled at him, “You’re not just saying it to cheer me up?” “No I mean it!” “I thought you wanted someone like Soul?” she kissed him leaving a pale lip stick mark on his cheek, “I meant it would be nice to find someone like Soul I didn’t mean him, if all the guys in the world were like him they would all flock to Maka!” she said jokingly Kid just raised an eyebrow to her.

He put a hand on her face; it made her skin crawl in a good way “I like you far too much than I should!” he said, “I like you to a lot!” his face little up, holding her hands “Can I take you out to dinner Liz?” He asked her, she smiled at him, “Kid are you asking me out on a date?” “Yes!” He said moving closer to her, “I never done this before!” he said, Liz rested her forehead on his, “Don’t worry about it!” she said as they kissed each other, at first it was awkward, but after a little while they got use to each other. They moved way from each other to breath in, “You like that!” she said to the dreamily looking Kid, “I like it!” he said pulling her into another kiss.
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BluewolfGodith's avatar
so cute! i am happy for liz and kid! one of the best soul eater couples ever!